Shadow
Posts : 23 Join date : 2010-01-06 Age : 29
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| Subject: The Invasion Begins for shadow! [EVIL] Thu Jan 07, 2010 4:05 pm | |
| Shadow was again in controle of the body and was walking through the woods when he heard something he didint know what to do so he went with what he learned through life shoot first then shoot some more later as he fired a ki blast into the bush makeing what seemed to be an alein jump out he looked at the alein with a scared look on his face "Wait i dont want to fight" he said "Im alenato im from a race of aleins here to take over this planet." he said "Is that so." Shadow said as he charged up another ki blast "Wait if you let me live i well let you join us you could have anything you want power,money,women" he said "hmm power and women you say" shadow said thinking "alright fine" he said as he shook hands with the alein as he lead shadow to the ship but what shadow was really thinking was this "when this idiot leads me to his ship i follow orders for a little bit get some stuff for working for them and when i have no more use for them i well kill them" he thought chuckling on the out side "whats so funny" the alein asked "nothing" he said as they made it to the ship.
[END FIRST QUEST]
ooc: i dont know what i was thinking puting this line power and women you say i think i just put that there just for a joke
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Hishy Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Invasion Begins for shadow! [EVIL] Thu Jan 07, 2010 7:12 pm | |
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Rampoh Reborn
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